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Aimed Too High

Today’s writing prompt at dVerse Poet’s Pub is for every poem to begin like this:
Once upon a _________ (you fill in the blank with any word except “time”) So a poem starting with Once upon a time would NOT fit the prompt! BUT, poems starting like this, for example, do fit the prompt:
Once upon a lily pad
Once upon a glimmer
Once upon a noodle
Once upon a midnight, etc…


 

Once upon a shot

I took my best and missed; the

one who got away.

 

 

Susan Marie Shuman/ SusanWritesPrecise
https://davidkeithlaw.wordpress.com

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23 responses to “Aimed Too High”

  1. Truedessa Avatar

    Missed the one that got away – the dream, love, success or is it something darker? Pondering

    The photo and words leave the reader with a bit of mystery. Well done..

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you Truedessa! I like that picture, too.

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  2. Maggie C Avatar

    A lot of potential interpretations. I like that.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks Maggie. Glad you stopped by!

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  3. Gina Avatar

    sometimes all we get is just that one shot – brief but straight to the point

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      You’re exactly right, Gina. And it just sucks so hard when you miss.

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      1. Gina Avatar

        sometimes its timing, that other person’s time needs to sync with ours, its the language of the universe

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  4. lillian Avatar

    Short but oh the possibilities! :) Brings to mind the song in Hamilton :) Not going to miss my shot — but this one does.

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  5. Tina Stewart Brakebill Avatar

    Love this–and not just because of Hamilton but NOT not because of it <3

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  6. mhmp77 Avatar
    mhmp77

    kaykuala

    Aiming high but there are disasters along the way to be aware of!

    Hank

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Disasters are everywhere, especially where love is concerned. Thanks, mhmp77

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  7. Vivian Zems Avatar

    This is why haikus were created. A powerful image through your words.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Vivian. Much appreciated.

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Love the different ways this might go… someone at least is gone.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Someone certainly is. Thank you, Bjorn.

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  9. Beverly Crawford Avatar

    …and we all cry elucidate! Clever and catchy!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Beverly! When I wrote this I had a relationship in mind. I guess it wasn’t as obvious as I thought. :-)

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  10. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Some will get away.

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  11. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    You only get one first shot. If you’re lucky, you get a second chance.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Luck plays a huge role, you are right!

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