aka, The Abject Muse

SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman

The Truth

Today at MLMM we have Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, November 7th 2018 the voice of the wind.

 

Autumn’s crisp, clean breeze

(lacking Spring’s hyperbole)

tells it like it is.

 

SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman
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5 responses to “The Truth”

  1. Somewhere Sea Avatar
    Somewhere Sea

    Very nicely done–I hadn’t thought about the difference between autumn and spring breezes :)

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thanks, Leslie. I hadn’t either. It was part of the writing prompt. Interesting idea, I thought.

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      1. Somewhere Sea Avatar
        Somewhere Sea

        Truly, it is interesting. And I suspected there was a deeper meaning in your poem, but my fatigued mind just grabbed for the obvious “breeze” :)

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      2. The Abject Muse Avatar
        The Abject Muse

        Not really Leslie, but there should have been! :-)

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      3. Somewhere Sea Avatar
        Somewhere Sea

        Ahhh…. :)

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