The Gun

It is First Line Friday over at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie. Our writing prompt for this week is “Take the gun.”


“Take the gun,” Gary whispered.

Melanie stifled a giggle. “And leave the cannoli?”

“Oh, for God’s sake!” Gary flung the script to the floor. “Will you please be serious for once?”

“I couldn’t help it!” Melanie laughed. “As soon as you said ‘take the gun,’ that one scene from The Godfather came to mind. You know the one where —”

“Whatever, Melanie,” Gary interrupted. This part in Mason’s play could be my big break. Don’t you get that?”

Melanie walked over and put her arm around Gary. “Yes, I get that,” she said quietly. “I’m sorry for joking around.”

Gary smiled at her and sighed. “It’s okay. Sorry I yelled.”

Melanie shrugged. “Let’s give it another shot.”

“Yeah.” Gary picked his script up from the floor. “Let me get into character.”

After a few deep breaths, he began.

“Take the gu —.”

“No! Gary!” Melanie rushed to where Gary lay dead on the floor. “Oh, my God!”

The  bullet left a small hole in the living room window.

 

 

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9 responses to “The Gun”

  1. Wordifull Melanie Avatar

    well i didn’t see that ending coming!

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  2. Wordifull Melanie Avatar

    and by the way that scene is EXACTLY what popped in my head when i first read the prompt…and my name is Melanie ;)

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Whoa! That’s pretty wild. Maybe you’d better stay away from windows for a while. :-)

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  3. Fandango Avatar

    Whoa. I didn’t expect that at all. Good one!

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  4. The Abject Muse Avatar

    Thanks, Fandango! Much appreciated. :-)

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  5. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Great twist at the end, totally unexpected! Great minds indeed!

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  6. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Great twist. I’d look at whom ever us set to step into that part as my first suspect….

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  7. tedstrutz Avatar

    Well, that’s interesting. I’m picturing a stray shot from a drive-by.

    Running lines, done that so many times for actors, brought back memories.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      I envisioned a drive-by too. Thanks, Ted!

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