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Free

Today the dVerse Poets Pub has tasked us with pouring a powerful spirit poem cocktail. Or go ghostie with it. Get into the spirit of the holidays. Is your muse a restless spirit? Write about it! Use it as an adjective: spiritual, or spirited (lively, full of energy). Spirit can even be a verb: to convey rapidly and secretly.


A free spirit

(not by choice but

circumstance)

treading wet cement.

Stuck alone and

ripped apart.

Neither seeking nor

being sought,

but waiting in limbo.

What else can you do

when your puzzle’s

missing piece

is anxiously awaiting

your arrival

on the Other Side?

 


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6 responses to “Free”

  1. whimsygizmo Avatar

    I love the longing in that “puzzle’s missing piece.”

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  2. msjadeli Avatar

    That’s a tough one, Susan :( I feel your frustration here.

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  3. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Nice ending. I like the thought of the missing piece waiting.

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  4. Phillip Knight Scott Avatar

    Very powerful imagery in this one. I feel the pain throughout.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much, Phillip!

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Being separated like this sounds like limbo a lot.

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