SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman

The Drug

For the dVerse Prosery prompt, we write prose that includes a line from a poem. This line is given in the prompt—you do not choose it. Our Prosery piece must not exceed 144 words.


I don’t know why I was surprised every time love started or ended.

I use the same MO every time; they begin and end the same way.

Married guys are the biggest challenge so those are the ones I go for. The best part is when the flirting and games evolve into infatuation. This takes some time, especially if they still love their wives. But when it finally happens — and it always does — I get a nice little rush, like a drug.

To hook ’em and hook ’em good, I make sure the sex is absolutely phenomenal.

And that’s pretty much all there is to it. After they’re really into me & start making noise about leaving the wife and marrying me, I cut them loose. Game over!

I mean, seriously. Who wants a guy who you know for certain screws around on his wife?

21 responses to “The Drug”

  1. Well done, even though I hate her. :)
    I thought she was going to be a murderer!

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    1. Thank you, merril! She’s not too popular that’s for sure :-)

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    gillena cox

    Hmmm, nice one
    Happy Monday

    Much❤love

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  3. Glenn A. Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn A. Buttkus

    Tongue in cheek, bold message, naughty premise, And a wonderful use of the prompt.

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    1. Thank you, Glenn!

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  4. Fabulous use of the prompt, and well written.

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    1. Thanks you, Linda!

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  5. Oh My! In a way I understand the logic. It’s like a test drive. Good story!

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    1. LOL at test drive.! Glad you enjoyed, Lisa :-).

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    Sherry Marr

    Ha, well done, she is, sadly, all too believable.

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    1. It’s a shame there really are people like that out there.

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    Sherry Marr

    Ha, well done, she is, sadly, all too believable.

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  8. Isn’t she a bitch!!

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    1. Indeed, she is. :-)

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  9. It’s more difficult to create an unlikeable character, Susan, and you’ve done such a good job with this one!

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    1. Yeah, she doesn’t have many BFFs. LOL!

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  10. Ha.. at least you shouldn’t be surprised if he screws you… they are jerks those guys.

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  11. Goes on all the time, yet you know he’s already cheating, so you have to consider what makes you so special.

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