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The Clue | A Villanelle

Susan Marie Shuman
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I wish I knew how to quit you*

Although my heart breaks at the thought.

But neither of us has a clue.

I gazed into your eyes and knew

This crazy love would come to naught.

I wish I knew how to quit you.

Sunshine, rain, and winter’s ice blue

In a maze of feelings we’re caught,

But neither of us has a clue.

Deep in my heart, my love is true

No matter how hard my mind fought.

I wish I knew how to quit you.

Now it comes, the turn of the screw

With pain and regret my life’s fraught

But neither of us has a clue.

Turns out I should have fought for you

I miss you and the love you brought.

I wish I knew how to quit you

But neither of us had a clue.

*From the film Brokeback Mountain.

3 responses to “The Clue | A Villanelle”

  1. I like this form the more I read it. Well done.

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    1. Thank you, Chel. I’m glad to hear because I pondered it for a while, deciding whether or not to post.

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      1. I’m glad you did!

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