Simon and the Balcony

This week’s Story Starter teaser is:

He quickly climbed the trellis and reached the balcony outside of her bedroom.


“H-h-hi, Margo.” Simon said timidly. He could feel his face flushing, and he hoped Margo couldn’t tell.

“Whaddaya mean?” Simon inquired. “You told me to come by tonight. Oh, and I tripped.”

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14 responses to “Simon and the Balcony”

  1. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Your Simon didn’t fare much better than mine! Love your take Susan.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      No, he sure didn’t! I am not even sure I can write a happy ending. LOL!

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        The love of his life wasn’t after that revelation, but then if he was dreaming…………….

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  2. Fandango Avatar

    Now that was a bad dream, but talk about being “saved by the bell.”

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Many thanks, Peter!

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  3. newepicauthor Avatar

    Great story Susan, with wonderful characters that seemed very real to me. Maybe Simon’s face and body will get better so he can help Margo out with her algebra homework, as that is as close as he is ever going to get to this hot babe.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Jim. I wonder sometimes if my characters are believable or not. Anyway, so glad you liked it!

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  4. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Thankfully it was all a dream or would that be a nightmare 🤔

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      That’s for sure! Thank you, Violet.

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  5. niasunset Avatar
    niasunset

    This is a surprising story, it didn’t turn out as I expected when I read it. I liked it. I like surprises. Poor Simon… Thank you dear Susan, it was great writing. Love, nia

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you so much, Nia. I like surprises too. I love a good plot twist! :-)

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