Today at dVerse, our prompt is “Come to the Circus!”


Here it comes again —

the circus: where animals

cry on the inside.

 

Performing stupid

painful, unnatural tricks

wishing they were home.

 

Whips and prods, people

yelling laughing big bright lights—

no wonder they snap.

 

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39 responses to “The Circus!”

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      I know. It’s heartbreaking. Thank you for stopping by.

  1. memadtwo Avatar

    Finally, people are thinking of the animals, not just using them. It’s taken far too long. (K)

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you mtm. Glad you stopped by!

  2. rothpoetry Avatar

    It does seem absurd to put animals through those antics. Well Done!

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Roth. :-)

  3. Chris Hall Avatar

    Appropriately brutal and sad, for a horrid and unnecessary form of ‘entertainment’. A great way to highlight.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Chris. Much appreciated!

  4. Waltermarks Avatar

    I have to admit, I’ve never seen the circus. I wanted to but the folks never took us. My memories are all of films. When I think of jumping through hoops and fending off vicious people with whips, I think of work

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks Waltermarks. It makes me think of slavery. Thanks for stopping by!

  5. Singledust Avatar

    sadly this is the truth, the reality we pretend not to see

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Agreed! Thanks for stopping by, Singledust.

  6. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

    A searing look beyond the big top. Wonderful senryu sequence!

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much, Frank!

      1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

        My pleasure! 😇

  7. anmol(alias HA) Avatar

    It is a grim reminder of this exploitation — I admire your critique of this system. Well-penned.
    -HA

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much, HA!

  8. Glenn Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn Buttkus

    Today, Cirque replaces Circus, and there are no animal acts–but there still are some small traveling Circus groups that cling to the animal traditions; a dying art form for sure.

  9. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love your viewpoint… and I actually think the circus becomes better with acrobats and trapeze magicians

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks, Bjorn. I wish they wouldn’t have animals at all.

  10. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I like the description of animals crying on the inside.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
  11. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    How I feel too. Animals in circuses are banned in many places. Even one of the big family circuses here, Bouglione (French spelling, Italian name) have come out for animal welfare and condemn the circuses that still use and abuse animals.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Good for them! I hope one day all circuses are animal-free. Thanks for stopping by!

      1. Jane Dougherty Avatar

        Most European countries have a ban on wild animals, and many towns here won’t allow circuses with any animal acts at all.

  12. V.J. Knutson Avatar

    It’s so unnatural. Thankfully, kids today are smarter.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Yes, thank God. I’d only been to one circus in my life and that was enough. Thank you, VJ!

      1. V.J. Knutson Avatar

        One was enough for me too.

  13. S M Connor Avatar

    Thankfully, I’ve never seen a circus with animal acts – other than horses. This is very poignant, and goes right to the heart of it. The illustration is perfectly chosen, too – those elephants look deeply unhappy.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, SM. Yes, the expressions on the elephants’ face says it all.

  14. Dorianna Avatar

    Part of the circus few give thought to sadly…how the poor animals feel. nicely penned

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Dorianna. I do feel for the animals.

  15. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    The other side of the coin behind the lights and the magic. Well written.

  16. gillena cox Avatar
    gillena cox

    Nice write

    Much😊💛😊love

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
  17. annell4 Avatar

    Yes, that is how I remember the circus!!

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      I think circuses should be banned everywhere, but that probably won’t happen. Thank you for stopping by!

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