Today at the MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie Blog, it’s Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille. Our task is to revise this Haiku by Basho:

In these drops of dew
Let me wash as a trial
The dust of this world.


Morning dewdrops heal,

cleanse this human-stained planet

time and time again.

 

SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman
dreamicus.com

 

 

7 responses to “Stain”

  1. MeenalSonal Avatar

    Very beautifully carved Haiku. Yes we need regular checks on ourselves.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
  2. Marie Avatar

    Great retelling of this haiku. Well done.

  3. Jules Avatar

    Perfect Earth Day salutation.
    Earth Day should be … every day. :)

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      For some people, Earth Day is every day! :-)

    2. The Abject Muse Avatar

      And thank you, Jules.

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