Bad Juju

The writing prompts are orrery, helix, ash grey, burning sage, and tissue.


“Humph!” Annika mumbled. Something wasn’t right. The orrery made no sense to her.

“Uh, well sure,” Annika replied. “Just tell me where & what it is, and I’d be happy to get it for you.”

 

 

 

SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman
Sage Smudge Stick. LauraBenko.com


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17 responses to “Bad Juju”

  1. Jules Avatar

    We used four out of the same five words!

    Now though you have us all guessing as to what that couple left that would upset the balance of things so. ;) But I suppose it could have been anything, even if it wasn’t completely bad Juju.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks for stopping by, Jules! I haven’t quite decided what the former tenants left. Good question!

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      1. tedstrutz Avatar

        I figured you didn’t know.

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      2. tedstrutz Avatar

        Just a feeling, and I didn’t need an orrey or crystal ball to get it. If I had written this story, I wouldn’t have known either. That’s the fun of it.

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      3. The Abject Muse Avatar

        I should’ve come up with something cool, but at the time I was doing good just to come up with that ending. :-)

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      4. tedstrutz Avatar

        p.s. I had to go look up orrery… very cool.

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      5. The Abject Muse Avatar

        I did too. It was part of the writing prompt.

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      6. tedstrutz Avatar

        No, that’s the point, it’s better not to have come up with something. I really liked this story.

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      7. The Abject Muse Avatar

        Now that you mention it, I agree. Thanks Ted!

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  2. lifelessons Avatar

    Ha. Well done!!! Now I must look up the word “orrery.”

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  3. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Hmmm I wonder what it could have been?? Very fun write.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Violet. :-)

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  4. tedstrutz Avatar

    Loved her going through all of her devices to find something that would work. And, I liked the way you described the Wickersham’s. Fun story.

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