Bad Juju

The writing prompts are orrery, helix, ash grey, burning sage, and tissue.


“Humph!” Annika mumbled. Something wasn’t right. The orrery made no sense to her.

“Uh, well sure,” Annika replied. “Just tell me where & what it is, and I’d be happy to get it for you.”

 

 

 

SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman
Sage Smudge Stick. LauraBenko.com

17 responses to “Bad Juju”

  1. We used four out of the same five words!

    Now though you have us all guessing as to what that couple left that would upset the balance of things so. ;) But I suppose it could have been anything, even if it wasn’t completely bad Juju.

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, Jules! I haven’t quite decided what the former tenants left. Good question!

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      1. I figured you didn’t know.

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      2. Just a feeling, and I didn’t need an orrey or crystal ball to get it. If I had written this story, I wouldn’t have known either. That’s the fun of it.

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      3. I should’ve come up with something cool, but at the time I was doing good just to come up with that ending. :-)

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      4. p.s. I had to go look up orrery… very cool.

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      5. I did too. It was part of the writing prompt.

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      6. No, that’s the point, it’s better not to have come up with something. I really liked this story.

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      7. Now that you mention it, I agree. Thanks Ted!

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  2. Ha. Well done!!! Now I must look up the word “orrery.”

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  3. Hmmm I wonder what it could have been?? Very fun write.

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    1. Thank you, Violet. :-)

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  4. Loved her going through all of her devices to find something that would work. And, I liked the way you described the Wickersham’s. Fun story.

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