Today’s prompts at Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday are cold and storm, synonyms only.
Where I am concerned,
‘A whirlwind of apathy’
best describes your heart.
And you? A limp, oily carp,
yesterday’s catch thrown back.

Today’s prompts at Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday are cold and storm, synonyms only.
Where I am concerned,
‘A whirlwind of apathy’
best describes your heart.
And you? A limp, oily carp,
yesterday’s catch thrown back.

I think we’ve all felt this way at times…(K)
I agree. Thanks for stopping by!
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Lovely tanka!!🙂
Thank you, Helene!
My pleasure.
Oh, I like this Tanka… Lots of powerful emotions explode from your words. The comparison to a carp… excellent! <3
Thanks so much, Colleen.
Nicely done!
Thank you!
Oh, I do like that catch-line. :)
Thanks! Much appreciated :-)
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