The Rubaiyat poetry form for dVerse Poets Pub.


He was the man they loved to hate

For reasons one can’t clearly state.

A lonely man without a friend,

It seemed like much too cruel a fate.

 

A wealthy man who dared not spend

This one rule he would not bend

One day he met a girl named Kate

And fell in love end over end

 

She liked him too, and could not wait

For him to ask her for a date

And so it went until the day

He found out Kate was jail-bait.

 

Too young was she to have a man

All he could say was damn, damn, damn.

They kissed goodbye and parted ways

But not before they hatched a plan.

 

One rainy night they ran away

Together always, night and day

He spent his money, wild and free

It’s true, their love was meant to be.

 

 

SusanMarie Shuman/ SusanWritesPrecise

 

29 responses to “A Rubaiyat: Love Wins Again”

  1. Mish Avatar

    Snappy rhythm, fun to read aloud.

  2. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar

    A cute romantic tale.

  3. lillian Avatar

    Quite the love tale here! A pre-cursor to Valentine’s Day!

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I would love it… though it always make me uneasy with someone too young… (makes me think of Lolita)

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Understood. She was only a year or so too young. It wasn’t a huge age difference. Just enough to cause an issue. :-)

  5. Grace Avatar

    I enjoyed the story very much. Love wins, for both of them.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Glad to hear, Grace! Thank you for stopping by and commenting. :-)

  6. The Abject Muse Avatar

    Thank you, Robert. :-)

  7. robtkistner Avatar

    I love criws and ravens, the bold little tricksters… this was an enjoyable read Susan.

  8. Gina Avatar

    when love wins! love this so much, its carefree and light as love should be

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you Gina. I appreciate you!

      1. Gina Avatar

        aww…that is so sweet and as I do you too and how your words impact me

      2. The Abject Muse Avatar

        My head is beginning to swell in a big way! Thank you, Gina.

      3. Gina Avatar

        😊

  9. V.J. Knutson Avatar

    Quite the ballad of love!

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Usually when I write about love I choose the unrequited flavor. Thought I’d try something different. :-) Glad you enjoyed, V.J.!

      1. V.J. Knutson Avatar

        I tried something different too – seldom even write about love, especially the physical kind, lol

  10. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Nice tale from loneliness to love. I liked the phrase “loved to hate” at the beginning.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Frank!

  11. sarahsouthwest Avatar

    Very well structured, it flows very naturally. Well done.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, sarahsouthwest. :-)

  12. Violet Lentz Avatar

    That was marvelous!

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Really? Thanks so much!

  13. crimsonprose Avatar

    A simple like is insufficient. I mega-like. :)

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Whoa. This is my first mega-like! Mega-thanks!

      1. crimsonprose Avatar

        I like the Omar Khyyam.

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