Sun Flowers

The theme for our last weekend-meditation at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai was Sunflower and Ken has created a wonderful haiku to work with and create a Tan Renga with. You have to add the second stanza (2-lines approx. 14 syllables) through association on the scenes in the haiku. Here is that beauty by Ken:

 

© Ken Gierke (RivrVlogr)

garden at sunrise
shadows erased by first rays
sunflowers turning

their heads too late,

petals smoldering: Global Warming.

 

 

SusanWritesPrecise
ctvnews.ca

4 responses to “Sun Flowers”

  1. The future regarding weather doesn’t look very positive, does it?

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  2. Nice way of completing this Tan Renga Susan I love that you are given a message in your second stanza. And that’s not a positive future, but in a way you did point to it in a nice lovely way.

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    1. You just made my day, Chèvrefeuille. It means a lot coming from you. Thank you!

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      1. You are so welcome.

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