Ergo, the Ogre

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Warm Honey

Today at Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, the writing prompt is sensation.

It’s a slow

warm honey tingle

spiraling up

then down

like lava

lamp bubbles,

an aching quiver—

gently surging

swelling and then

you touch me…

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24 responses to “Warm Honey”

  1. Marian Avatar
    Marian

    Ah, that is a lovely sensation! :)

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      I’m glad I was able to convey it Marian. Thanks so much!

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  2. Gypsy Moon Avatar
    Gypsy Moon

    I love this. This is awesome. Honey and lava lamps — you hooked me. :)

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thanks so much, Gypsy Moon!

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    Love it… it’s the sensation of expectation that is the strongest…

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      True. Where would we be without expectation and imagination?

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  4. Helen Avatar
    Helen

    Ooooh, I can feel the warm honey! Nice write.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thanks so much, Helen!

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  5. Sherry Blue sky Avatar
    Sherry Blue sky

    Wonderful feeling!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thanks, Sherry. I agree!

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  6. Kerry Avatar
    Kerry

    Lava lamp bubbles…
    That’s exactly right!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thanks, Kerry! I struggled with that for quite a while. Wasn’t sure if people would view lava bubbles in that way, or if it was just me. :-)

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  7. annell4 Avatar
    annell4

    I think you got the words just right!!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thanks, Annell4! Much appreciated.:-)

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  8. Carrie V. H. Avatar
    Carrie V. H.

    Love is quite the sensation! Love the image of lava lamp bubbles as tingles up and down. This is wonderful Susan!!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thanks Carrie! So glad you enjoyed. :-)

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  9. Vivian Zems Avatar
    Vivian Zems

    This build-up is amazing! If only you could bottle it!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Wow. What a compliment! Thanks so much, Vivian.

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      1. Vivian Zems Avatar
        Vivian Zems

        :)

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  10. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    That sensation of a aching quiver gave me chills. Beautiful, Susan.

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  11. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    You had me at honey and lava lamp bubbles! This is beautiful! ❤️

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  12. Sreeja Harikrishnan Avatar
    Sreeja Harikrishnan

    Wonderful!!

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  13. Susie Clevenger Avatar
    Susie Clevenger

    Oh, my… Now this is quite a sensation

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you, Susie!

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