Ergo, the Ogre

Breathe

I have been tagged by crushedcaramel to create an elfchen, which is

 an 11 word poem written in 5 lines

— Line 1=1word,  Line 2=2words,  Line 3=3words, Line 4=4 words,  Line 5 =1 word.  

Lines 1 and 5 should not be the same word.  

Some

days I

miss you terribly.

Other days I can’t even

breathe.

 

Susan Marie Shuman/SusanWritesPrecise
lovethispic.com
Ergo, the Ogre
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5 responses to “Breathe”

  1. crushedcaramel Avatar
    crushedcaramel

    Wow! That’s so beautiful. I love it.

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  2. Life of Elliott... Avatar
    Life of Elliott…

    I
    Have no
    Idea how you
    Can do something like
    This.

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    Reply
    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      What do you mean?

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      1. Life of Elliott... Avatar
        Life of Elliott…

        Write a poem. I’m hopeless at it.

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      2. The Abject Muse Avatar
        The Abject Muse

        It takes a bit of practice. The more you read and practice, the better you will get. I learned a lot from https://dversepoets.com/.

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