To be Us

It’s Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie’s Lucky Dip! Today our writing prompt is the Oddquain โ€” a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of seventeen syllables distributed 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 in five lines, developed by Glenda L. Hand.


You

and I were

never meant to be

but we happened anyway.

Fate.

Hearts

like ours have

their own agenda:

they want you and me to be

Us.

 

The Three Fatesโ€™ by Paul Thumann: Clotho-Lachesis-and-Atropos

 

 

 

 

12 responses to “To be Us”

  1. Trying to reblog this but your site won’t let me.
    Love this.

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  2. Reblogged this on pensitivity101 and commented:
    Love this.
    Posting for my Hubby as it can so relate.
    Thank you

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  3. Managed to reblog on the third attempt!

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  4. Thanks so much! I’m honored & you made my day :-)

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  5. Ah, such are the ways of hearts. Can very much relate to this.

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    1. Thank you msjadeli. I appreciate you!

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      1. :) What a nice thing to say. You are very welcome.

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  6. How lovely and romantic! It was quite beautiful ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ’•

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    1. Thanks so much, Christine!

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  7. Really lovely, and such an interesting format…

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    1. Thank you. Much appreciated!

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  8. I recently used the Three Fates as my photo as well.. although my path was not the same. One can only guess what part the Fates have to play, but I for one continue to see their hand in it.

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