One Steamy Dip

Today’s prompt at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is “skinny dipping in the moonlight.”


you and me wearing

only moonlight’s sweet shimmer

rippling the ocean.

Our clothes wait patiently

in a tangled pile on shore.

 

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5 responses to “One Steamy Dip”

  1. “the patient clothes” love it!

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  2. Like the ‘wearing moonlight’s sweet shimmer’.

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    1. I liked that line too. :-)

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  3. only moonlight’s sweet shimmer

    rippling the ocean.

    Lovely lines!

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    1. Thank you, Rosemary!

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