aka, The Abject Muse

One Steamy Dip

Today’s prompt at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is “skinny dipping in the moonlight.”

you and me wearing

only moonlight’s sweet shimmer

rippling the ocean.

Our clothes wait patiently

in a tangled pile on shore.

 

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5 responses to “One Steamy Dip”

  1. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    “the patient clothes” love it!

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  2. pensitivity101 Avatar
    pensitivity101

    Like the ‘wearing moonlight’s sweet shimmer’.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      I liked that line too. :-)

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  3. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar
    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    only moonlight’s sweet shimmer

    rippling the ocean.

    Lovely lines!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you, Rosemary!

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