aka, The Abject Muse

In Nubibus

 

I sense them trying to form.

the sudden, mad syllabic rush

as if each thought is

battling to be voiced in unison.

A thunderous blast of wordlessness

everything and nothing —

an aborted cacophony —

utterances never to be heard,

over a blur of muted tears.

 

 

 

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14 responses to “In Nubibus”

  1. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    Speaks for pervasive sadness.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Yes, you nailed it. Thanks for stopping by!

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  2. whimsygizmo Avatar
    whimsygizmo

    Oh, I feel this, deeply. May those syllables be freed, and given back their voice.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thanks, Whimsy!

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  3. robtkistner Avatar
    robtkistner

    It is at times very noisy in our heads Susan, making it difficult to sort and assemble our thoughts.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      That’s for sure. Those voices in my head need to keep it down. :-)

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  4. Truedessa Avatar
    Truedessa

    There is sadness in trying to find the right words to let the inner voice be free.

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  5. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    tears act like plugs for the ears. sometimes better to let the body feel and visit the words later…

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Agreed. Sometimes it’s scary to feel all that. That’s life though, eh?

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  6. kim881 Avatar
    kim881

    Your quadrille has captured a familiar feeling, Susan, especially in the ‘thunderous blast of wordlessness’ and the ‘blur of muted tears’.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you, Kim. Sorry to hear this feeling is familiar to you. No fun, ugh!

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    Oh so many voices are silenced by the noise of others… may they be given the silence to be heard.

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  8. Lona Gynt Avatar
    Lona Gynt

    Clouds without rain don’t water. so well crafted, you have expressed an obscure sorrow, the feeling of being ready to let the ideas and the feelings flow, and then held back by some sort of circumspection.

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  9. The Abject Muse Avatar
    The Abject Muse

    Thank you for reading and commenting Lona. Your interpretation is spot-on. Very insightful! :-)

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