aka, The Abject Muse

Whispered

Today’s writing prompt at the dVerse Poets Pub is the word, tranquility.

In the tranquil, sweet

heart of the night

and the only other

sounds are dried oak leaves

tickling the sidewalk,

the most beautiful words

in the world

are the ones formed

by your lips and whispered

to me —

just me,

and no one else.

 

 

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14 responses to “Whispered”

  1. rothpoetry Avatar
    rothpoetry

    A very delicious poem of tranquility!

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    1. kanzensakura Avatar
      kanzensakura

      Lovely!

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      1. The Abject Muse Avatar
        The Abject Muse

        Thank you!

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    2. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you!

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  2. lillian Avatar
    lillian

    Ohhhhh…..this is wonderful. In the quiet of the night….with the love of your life….to have all his/her attention……such a gift.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      That would really be something, wouldn’t it? Sigh!

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  3. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    Such a tender thought, Susan. Very touching.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you, Lisa. :-)

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      1. msjadeli Avatar
        msjadeli

        You are welcome.

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  4. pvcann Avatar
    pvcann

    Such is true love, so moving.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you pvcann. :-)

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  5. robtkistner Avatar
    robtkistner

    Those are tender, beautiful moments — and precious, when they mean that much to us. Beautiful write Susan!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you, Rob. Much appreciated!

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    Indeed the most beautiful words are whispered by the one you love.

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