The Special Friend

It’s the Lucky Dip over at the MindloveMisery’s Menagerie Blog!ย  Today our mission is to craft a Monotetra.

Monotetra
The monotetra is a new poetic form developed by Michael Walker. Each stanza contains four lines in monorhyme. Each line is in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of eight syllables. What makes the monotetra so powerful as a poetic form, is that the last line contains two metrical feet, repeated. It can have as few as one or two stanzas, or as many as desired.

Stanza Structure:

Line 1: 8 syllables; A1
Line 2: 8 syllables; A2
Line 3: 8 syllables; A3
Line 4: 4 syllables, repeated; A4, A4

โ„ตโ„ตโ„ต

O, once I had a special friend

we laughed and chased the rainbow’s end

where sprites and faeries aren’t pretend,

a secret place that time transcends.

The years went by, our friendship grew

we lived in a world made for two.

never at loss for things to do

whatever we did seemed brand new.

The day our friendship turned to love

I thanked the stars and moon above

My life partner: sweet as a dove,

most of the time, kinda, sort of…

O, once I had a special friend

I’m sad to say it had to end.

Someone new waits just ’round the bend โ€”

a secret place that time transcends.

SusanWritesPrecise

7 responses to “The Special Friend”

  1. Nice one, Susan, and I love that picture at the end.

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    1. Thank you, Lisa. :-)

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      1. You are welcome :)

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  2. Great job! Such a tricky poetry form and you nailed it ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. Thank you so much, weejars!

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  3. Lovely verse to the illustration. A Hans Christian Anderson – friendly fairy tale feel. :)

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    1. Thank you, Jules!

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