SusanWritesPrecise/Susan Marie Shuman

The Man

It’s time for Friday Fictioneers again! This week, our photo prompt is the image above, by © J Hardy Carroll.

It could be worse.

At least there is a toilet and The People bring me food and water.

Sometimes, The Man comes alone.

I don’t like what he makes me do, but all I have to do is lay there.

Damn, does he ever stink!

Once, he brought me a pair of pretty-pink shoes (just to look at), since I’d “done good.”

I quit hoping someone would find me. The house is on a worn path, hidden by huge, gnarled oak trees.

I’m shackled, but the chains allow me to walk almost to the gate —

almost,

but not

quite.

 

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17 responses to “The Man”

  1. granonine Avatar

    There are more girls and women in captivity like this than we like to think about. Well-written.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      I’ve learned that there is currently more slavery in the US today than ever before. It just looks different and is difficult to recognize. Thanks for stopping by, granonine!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Indeed. The stuff of which nightmares are made. Thank you Iain!

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  2. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Susan,

    Unless I’m mistaken, a horrific and well told tale of human trafficking. You captured the language barrier well.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you much, Rochelle! You are not mistaken. I attended a human trafficking seminar last weekend; this piece is the result.

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  3. msjadeli Avatar

    Chills are going down my spine. I pray she finds a way to “take him out.” If anyone deserves death it is The Man who has imprisoned and is harming her. Chillingly told, Susan.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      I hope she finds a way as well. Hopefully a window of opportunity will open and she’ll make her move. Thanks, Lisa!

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome :)

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  4. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    She seems to have accepted her sorrowful situation. Sadly there’s no way of knowing how many others suffer in this dreadful way.

    Here’s my tale!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      It is very sad. I attended a sex and human trafficking seminar last weekend. I guess that triggered this piece. Thanks for stopping by and commenting!

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  5. siobhan1967 Avatar

    oh gosh, this is harsh. But so true sadly. This made me shiver.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Made me shiver to write it. Her complacency is chilling. Thanks, siobhan1967!

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Alas … there are too many in captivity and many are kept as “toys” like your protagonist.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Such a dismal existence.

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  7. Dale Avatar

    What a horrible situation, written very well, Susan.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much, Dale.:-)

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