Ergo, the Ogre

A Star

It’s Quadrille Monday over at the dVerse Poets Pub! Our writing prompt is Magic. Exactly 44 words.

A roomful
of people or
even a nightclub
when you looked at me
and grinned
that crooked grin
Poof!
the world disappeared.

Just you and me.

Sometimes that magic still happens
when I gaze at the midnight sky
and wonder

which star is you.

 

Ergo, the Ogre
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19 responses to “A Star”

  1. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    Oh WOW. So few words, but such a touching tale. I love this.

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    1. Arcadia Maria Avatar
      Arcadia Maria

      Lovely

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      1. The Abject Muse Avatar
        The Abject Muse

        Thank you so much, Arcadia Maria.

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  2. revivedwriter Avatar
    revivedwriter

    I agree with Beverly: You told a poignant tale in only a few words.

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  3. Frank Hubeny Avatar
    Frank Hubeny

    I like the thought of having one’s attention so focused on another that the world disappears.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Me too. :-) Thanks, Frank!

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  4. angiecpoetry Avatar
    angiecpoetry

    the ending made my heart happy

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  5. kim881 Avatar
    kim881

    A magical bit of romance to make my Tuesday morning even sunnier!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you, Kim! What a nice thing to say. :-)

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  6. Vandana Sharma Avatar
    Vandana Sharma

    A heart touching love , never to be forgotten

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you, Vandana.

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  7. Xan Avatar
    Xan

    Sweet and devastating.

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  8. Linda Lee Lyberg Avatar
    Linda Lee Lyberg

    Heart rending in so few words.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you, Linda.

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  9. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    Sometimes we find the ones we miss in the far-away sky.

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  10. slfuchs Avatar
    slfuchs

    Such precision! Wow! So impressive!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you, Stephen. They don’t call me SusanWritesPrecise for nothing! :-) Glad you enjoyed!

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  11. jazzytower Avatar
    jazzytower

    So romantic 😊.

    Pat

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thank you, Pat. :-)

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