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Breakfast for Two

This week at Friday Fictioneers, Rochelle has chosen the photo below as or writing prompt. 100 words.


Sylvia was one of those people who made friends wherever she went. Real friends — not the superficial kind in which one outgrows the other.

After Sylvia started a couple of kitchen fires, her children decided it was time for a nursing home.

Truth be known, Sylvia was terribly lonely. And then one morning, a bird perched on her windowsill as she ate her breakfast. She slowly cracked the window and shared some toast crumbs with him.

Soon, the bird began showing up every day at 7:45am.

One morning, the bird found the window closed.

He waited, but Sylvia never came.

 

 

 

 

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25 responses to “Breakfast for Two”

  1. tedstrutz Avatar

    right to the heart

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Yeah, it made me sad too.

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  2. Mike Avatar
    Mike

    I enjoyed this slice of life as seen by the creature of nature.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Mike!

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  3. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    She even made real friends with the bird. I feel bad for the bird.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Me too. Poor little guy would never have understood.

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  4. msjadeli Avatar

    I hope Sylvia makes new friends at her new place.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      I’m sure she will. :-)

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  5. draliman Avatar

    Such a sad ending, lovely piece!

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  6. Iain Kelly Avatar

    How lovely that the bird offered that last bit of companionship. Nicely done.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you so much, Iain!

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  7. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Oh, I teared up at this. So sad.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Me too. The story sort of wrote itself. I had no intention of going that route.

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  8. Doug Jacquier Avatar

    Nailed it this week, Susan. Well structured.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you Doug. Much appreciated!

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  9. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Susan,

    This is a heartbreaker. Well told.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  10. Dale Avatar

    Awwwww :(

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  11. susanmehr Avatar

    Touching, beautifully written.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Susan!

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  12. michaelwynnauthor Avatar

    Poor Sylvia, but at least she wasn’t alone in her last days. Very emotive story, well done

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much, Michael!

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  13. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    I took a similar tack to you, but different. Its a sad and familiar tale I guess, well written

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  14. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    This is such a sad tale, but at least Sylvia had someone to keep her company to the end.

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  15. granonine Avatar

    awww, poor birdie. Poor Sylvia. Really good writing :)

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