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Synesthesia is a neurological phenomenon in which stimulation of one sense leads to automatic, involuntary experiences of a second one.   There are over 80 types of synesthesia described by science.   Nearly every combination of sensory experiences or cognitive concepts is possible.

Seeing music as colors is one form of synesthesia. Perceiving letters as personalities is another one,  or seeing numbers in color. Even hearing colors or touching smells.

That said, tonight our task at dVerse Poets Pub is to write about color from the perspective of a synesthete. Pick one color or several colors. Create your own Dictionary of Color. All sounds have color. The alphabet has color. Days of the week have color. Each day has a color and a certain shape.

Hmmm. I misread (failed to read) the directions and probably did this wrong.

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The sound of his smile is sunshine

scented with rainbows at

twilight and willow trees

shimmering in purple dusk.

The periwinkle ping

of an angel’s harp

tickles the forest —

green giggling of leaves.

when he speaks

a morning dew whisper

against my sighing skin

shuddering pink then blue

and a cinnamon-ripple of vowels

tingled in a wave of consonants

surge at his touch:

Unpunctuated.

12 responses to “Unpunctuated”

  1. annieasksyou Avatar

    I stopped by to thank you for liking my post on Fandango’s blog. But this poem totally captivated me, so I am now your newest follower.

    Cheers,
    Annie

  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    So many things to like with this.. but I especially loved the cinnamon-ripple of vowels

  3. poetrybydebi Avatar

    “The periwinkle ping of an angel’s harp” that sounds so right you have have heard it!

  4. msjadeli Avatar

    Has the touch of a synthete all over it. The angel’s harp and the giggling leaves stand out here. Magical.

  5. Mary (tqhousecat) Avatar

    Doesn’t sound like you did anything g wrong here. This is beautiful!

  6. M Jay Dixit Avatar

    You had me at first line. This is perfect! You rocked the prompt❤

  7. Dora Avatar

    I think you nailed it beautifully :)

  8. Lucy Avatar

    Susan, this is lovely. Really enjoyed these lines:

    “The periwinkle ping

    of an angel’s harp

    tickles the forest —

    green giggling of leaves.”

    The way it flows and the lightness here, I feel I am absorbed in the artist’s imagery. ;) Excellent work.

  9. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    “when he speaks a morning dew whisper against my sighing skin shuddering pink then blue,”… yes, yes! You describe this so well! Beautiful! 💝

  10. Ron. Avatar

    You definitely did NOT get this wrong, Susan. You got this exactly RIGHT. Congrats!
    That angel’s harp stanza rocks, bigly.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks, Ron! Much appreciated.

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