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Earl’s Favorite

It’s Quadrille Monday over at the dVerse Poets Pub. This week our host is De Jackson of WhimsyGizmo fame and our writing prompt is some form of the word dab.

Janelle dabbed a bit of Chantilly

(It was Earl’s favorite)

behind each ear and smiled at

her reflection in the mirror.

Two glasses of champagne,

Two place-settings at the table —

anniversary dinner for one.

Janelle raised her glass:

“To us!”

Then the tears came.


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11 responses to “Earl’s Favorite”

  1. Maggie C Avatar

    Very impactful.

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  2. Xan Avatar
    Xan

    Right in the feels.

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  3. De Jackson Avatar
    De Jackson

    Awww. This is deeply touching, and so sad. Well done.

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  4. rothpoetry Avatar

    A wonderful poem… I love the twist at the end!

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  5. Carol Congalton Avatar
    Carol Congalton

    Sad and poignant. Beautifully penned.

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  6. msjadeli Avatar

    :( so painful. Wishing it could be different for her.

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  7. Dora Avatar

    Beautifully written. Wonderful memories make the grief all the sharper.

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    So very sad… and scents are so impactful

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  9. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    Oh my aching heart this is poignant!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much, Sanaa! :-)

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