The Waiter

Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haiku. Apparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
3 lines.
No rhymes.
10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.

Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.

Sipping white wine; eyes fixed on the doorway.

The old tavern filled up.

She kept staring. Waiting.

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7 responses to “The Waiter”

  1. Kendra couldn’t decide how to answer.
    Should she be flippant or straight?
    Oh, the hell with it, more wine.

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    1. I like Kendra. :-)

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  2. I tried one too. Also checked out Poetry Kaleidoscope. Thanks for the idea.

    The picture posted with yours was great,

    Cheers.

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  3. She might need an entree. :)

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    1. Or a valium. Hope she isn’t armed. :-)

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      1. Just two.

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