SusanritesPrecise

Nobody

 

Darkness fell like sin

Sultry N’awlins summer night.

Nobody seen us. 

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11 responses to “Nobody”

  1. milan rajkumar Avatar

    that’s full of darkness ! Wow !

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks. I seem to have a knack for dark. :-)

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      1. milan rajkumar Avatar

        Yes , exactly !!!

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  2. Aidin Avatar
    Aidin

    That was short, but captivating. I think the last line was perfect and heightened tone. Great post!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much, Aidin! :-)

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  3. Leonas Lines Avatar

    Wow! Double darkness for sure! Great use of the prompt.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Leona. Much appreciated!

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  4. Jael Sook Avatar

    Oh my YES–Powerful pen strokes!

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      1. Jael Sook Avatar

        Most welcome :)

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  5. magickmermaid Avatar

    A whole story in just a few words! :)

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