21 responses to “Rattled”

  1. messymimi's meanderings Avatar

    Makes me glad I carry too much of my cleaning supplies in the back for anyone to hide there!

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Good point, Mimi! Thanks for stopping by!

  2. GirlieOnTheEdge Avatar

    Nicely done! Can’t think of anything more frightening!

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much!

  3. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Oh my, that’s scary! Nice one, though!

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
  4. Peter's pondering Avatar

    Let’s hope the car has a cigarette lighter – they make perfect weapons, especially against bare chests!

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Good thinking! That’s a really good idea.

  5. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Eeeekkkkkk!!!!!

  6. Esther Chilton Avatar

    Scary isn’t the word! Eek!

  7. newepicauthor Avatar

    That would freak anyone out.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      I agree! It was a fun write though.

  8. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    That was spooky like a nightmare.

  9. Chris Hall Avatar

    Oh wow, that was scary… and now?🏃‍♀️‍➡️

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      That’s a good question. Thanks for commenting!

  10. clark Avatar

    engage us Readers much?*

    *compliment on a most efficacious bunch of early wordage

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks, Violet! That would be scary huh? I don’t know what I’d do. Probably freeze.

    2. The Abject Muse Avatar

      I seem to, Clark. :-) Thanks for stopping by!

  11. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Well that scares the sh*t out of me! I think I would wreck the car on purpose.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Violet! I don’t know what I’d do. Freeze, probably.

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