SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman

 

Date palms swish and sway;
Bedouins’ smoking hookahs
scent the desert breeze

 

 

Susan Marie Shuman
https://www.carlcrumley.com/

 

 

6 responses to “The Desert”

  1. Somewhere Sea Avatar

    You wrote this so evocatively, I felt transported…could smell the dates, feel the warmth rising up to my face.

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Wow, thanks Leslie! :-)

      1. Somewhere Sea Avatar

        Most welcome, dear <3

    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks you so much. :-)

      1. Hélène Vaillant Avatar

        You are welcome.

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