
Date palms swish and sway;
Bedouins’ smoking hookahs
scent the desert breeze


Date palms swish and sway;
Bedouins’ smoking hookahs
scent the desert breeze

You wrote this so evocatively, I felt transported…could smell the dates, feel the warmth rising up to my face.
Wow, thanks Leslie! :-)
Most welcome, dear <3
An amazing haiku.
Thanks you so much. :-)
You are welcome.
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