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The Desert

 

SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman

 

Date palms swish and sway;
Bedouins’ smoking hookahs
scent the desert breeze

 

 

Susan Marie Shuman
https://www.carlcrumley.com/

 

 

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6 responses to “The Desert”

  1. Hélène Vaillant Avatar
    Hélène Vaillant

    An amazing haiku.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Thanks you so much. :-)

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      1. Hélène Vaillant Avatar
        Hélène Vaillant

        You are welcome.

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  2. Somewhere Sea Avatar
    Somewhere Sea

    You wrote this so evocatively, I felt transported…could smell the dates, feel the warmth rising up to my face.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar
      The Abject Muse

      Wow, thanks Leslie! :-)

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      1. Somewhere Sea Avatar
        Somewhere Sea

        Most welcome, dear <3

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