SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman

Synchronicity

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Your lips move

In sync with your hands,

giving a voice to the words

that live

in your heart.

You write them on the air

(in permanent, invisible ink)

and my heart can hear

~ So clearly ~

What my ears

cannot.

 

 


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24 responses to “Synchronicity”

  1. Prakash Hegade Avatar

    Too beautiful expression of love!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Prakash.

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  2. rob kistner Avatar

    I love the essence of this piece, speaks to the heart…

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much, Rob. :-)

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  3. Kislaya Avatar

    Love is in the air… Lovely composition :)

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Kislaya!

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    This is how passion should be, the sync between lips in hands especially

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      I agree, Bjorn. Thanks so much!

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  5. scotthastiepoet Avatar
    scotthastiepoet

    Powerful finish here especially Susan – I like it lot…

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Scott! Much appreciated.

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  6. Christine Irving Avatar

    Such a sweet love letter. Think I’ll read it to my love.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      I would be honored. This is a huge compliment, and I thank you, Christine.

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  7. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    This is absolutely stunning! ❤️

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, so much, sanaarizvi! :-)

      Like

  8. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I like the idea of the heart hearing.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Meet too, Frank. It’s magical.

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  9. Gina Avatar

    words only a heart can hear invisible in the air, I felt the magic here!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Gina! I am so glad you enjoyed.

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  10. katiemiafrederick Avatar

    Synchronicity’s Art
    Human Flow in
    Poetry
    Before
    Psych..After..:)

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    1. Lona Gynt Avatar

      yes, and as the great
      (Against Me!) Laura Grace
      Sings
      “Sometimes I just want to hear the
      Words from someone
      Like I used to
      hEAR the words
      From You…”
      The heart hears what it
      Touches, is it
      IneFFable or inscrutable
      sometimes too
      it Just cOMeS
      toGather

      Synchronicity

      Nice poem Susan, thanks, and reply flows KMF me friend

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      1. katiemiafrederick Avatar

        Beauty’s
        Sublime
        Synchronicity..:)

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      2. The Abject Muse Avatar

        Thank you so much, katiemiafrederick. :-)

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      3. katiemiafrederick Avatar

        Welcome..
        With Lights oF
        Happy Holidays..:)

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      4. The Abject Muse Avatar

        You said it beautifully. So did Laura Grace. Thanks for commenting, Lona. :-)

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