SusanWritesPrecise/ Susan Marie Shuman

Synchronicity

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Your lips move

In sync with your hands,

giving a voice to the words

that live

in your heart.

You write them on the air

(in permanent, invisible ink)

and my heart can hear

~ So clearly ~

What my ears

cannot.

 

 

24 responses to “Synchronicity”

  1. Too beautiful expression of love!

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    1. Thank you, Prakash.

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  2. I love the essence of this piece, speaks to the heart…

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    1. Thanks so much, Rob. :-)

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  3. Love is in the air… Lovely composition :)

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    1. Thank you, Kislaya!

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  4. This is how passion should be, the sync between lips in hands especially

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    1. I agree, Bjorn. Thanks so much!

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    scotthastiepoet

    Powerful finish here especially Susan – I like it lot…

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    1. Thank you, Scott! Much appreciated.

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  6. Such a sweet love letter. Think I’ll read it to my love.

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    1. I would be honored. This is a huge compliment, and I thank you, Christine.

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    sanaarizvi

    This is absolutely stunning! ❤️

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    1. Thank you, so much, sanaarizvi! :-)

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  8. I like the idea of the heart hearing.

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    1. Meet too, Frank. It’s magical.

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  9. words only a heart can hear invisible in the air, I felt the magic here!

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    1. Thank you, Gina! I am so glad you enjoyed.

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  10. Synchronicity’s Art
    Human Flow in
    Poetry
    Before
    Psych..After..:)

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    1. yes, and as the great
      (Against Me!) Laura Grace
      Sings
      “Sometimes I just want to hear the
      Words from someone
      Like I used to
      hEAR the words
      From You…”
      The heart hears what it
      Touches, is it
      IneFFable or inscrutable
      sometimes too
      it Just cOMeS
      toGather

      Synchronicity

      Nice poem Susan, thanks, and reply flows KMF me friend

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      1. Beauty’s
        Sublime
        Synchronicity..:)

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      2. Thank you so much, katiemiafrederick. :-)

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      3. Welcome..
        With Lights oF
        Happy Holidays..:)

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      4. You said it beautifully. So did Laura Grace. Thanks for commenting, Lona. :-)

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