Cold, Jagged, Piece

It’s Poetics Tuesday over at the dVerse Poets Pub. Tonight our mission is to write a NONET – a nine line poem that begins with 9 syllables, descending line by line to 1 syllable.
Select ONE of these 9 syllable lines as your opener (or more if you wish to write several nonets)

  • It seems as though you are still summer (cite Merwin)
  • Broken shadows across the cracked ground (cite Merwin)
  • The earthed lightning of a flock of swans (cite Heaney)
  • One side is wild with foam and glitter (cite Heaney)

I chose the second line, by William Stanley Merwin.


Broken shadows across the cracked ground

a monotone jigsaw puzzle

missing one cold, jagged piece

to complete the picture.

Rather than question,

most remain safe

within their

comfort

zone.

 

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8 responses to “Cold, Jagged, Piece”

  1. Laura Bloomsbury Avatar

    a telling undercurrent under that cracked ground!

    “missing one cold, jagged piece
    to complete the picture.”

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Indeed there is! Thanks for stopping by, Laura!

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  2. Helen Dehner Avatar

    It seems we must remain within our comfort zones these days …. lovely writing.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Helen. :-)

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    It’s too easy to remain in your comfort zone rather question why the fires are burning.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      True, unfortunately.

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  4. Dora Avatar

    The “cold jagged piece” is a brilliant metaphor for a painful intrusion into comfort zones.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much, Dora. I hadn’t looked at it that way, but you are exactly right!

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