For Some

It’s Poetics Tuesday over at the dVerse Poets Pub. The challenge is to write a poem in the first person that compares some trait of ours with something animal. It should not be a whale, but another creature (mammal, fish, bird, insect, etc.) with which we have something in common. The title should be the animal thing, in the same way Marjorie Saiser chose ‘The Print the Whales Make’.

For some, love is like

the fog — sneaking in on

tiny kitten paws.

Gently, sweetly almost

apologetically.

For others, love comes

slow and steady like

a pair of oxen

fettered together for

the long haul.

Nondescript, dependable

Predictable.

But for me,

for me love comes

screaming in

like a Spanish bull.

Wild, sinful thunder

Deliciously uncontrollable —

A splendid conflagration —

Dead on legit.

15 responses to “For Some”

  1. Very nice Susan.

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  2. Dead on legit poem!

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    “love comes screaming in like a Spanish bull,”… yes! Exquisitely woven! 💝💝

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  4. You captured love in all its shapes and sizes in this poem, Susan, from gentle, almost apologetic fog on its ‘tiny kitten paws’ to a Spanish bull ‘screaming in’. I’m not sure which I prefer, but I do appreciate the steadiness of ‘a pair of oxen fettered together for the long haul’, which I know my marriage has become. However, sometimes I dream about a ‘splendid conflagration’. 😊

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    1. Thank you, Kim. Love offers something for everyone, I guess. So glad you enjoyed!

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  5. I love your description of a wild, unbridled, passionate form of love:

    ‘screaming in
    like a Spanish bull.
    Wild, sinful thunder
    Deliciously uncontrollable —
    A splendid conflagration —’

    Ole!

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    1. Thank you, Ingrid!

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  6. Wow! It thunders home! I love the conviction and the intensity!

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    1. Thanks so much! Intensity is what I was after. :-)

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  7. “Deliciously uncontrollable” is an appealingly freeing phrase! Well done.

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    1. Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated!

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  8. I love those aspects of love…. starting with those gentle paws and ending with that passionate raging bull.

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    1. Thank you, Bjorn! :-)

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  9. The variations herein are engaging Susan. Love, and how we give and receive love, vary based on the overall situation — each is different, each is fascinating.

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    1. Agreed, rob. Thanks so much!

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