3TC #MM83 | Brothers

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If Max had something to tell him, why didn’t he visit Jeremy in his dreams‽ That made the most sense to Jeremy, but who knew what made sense in the afterlife‽ If he only had a clue, an inkling of what was going on with Max. He knew something had to be.

“He’s here,” Tanya whispered. “Max, is there something you’d like to say to your brother, Jeremy?”


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16 responses to “3TC #MM83 | Brothers”

  1. Ernie 'Dawg' Avatar

    You nailed this one beautifully.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thanks so much Ernie. I was bawling at the end of it.

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  2. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Beautiful story Susan. Thanks for using the 3TC.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Di. Much appreciated!

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  3. lisaapaul Avatar

    a very moving story! I loved this.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Lisa. I’m glad you enjoyed. :-)

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  4. Peter's pondering Avatar

    Very well constructed story Susan!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Peter!

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  5. newepicauthor Avatar

    It seems like Max is watching over his brother Jeremy, great story, Susan.

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Jim. It had me bawling at the end.

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  6. Violet Lentz Avatar

    First of all, I love how you sneaked in that punctuation Jim talked about earlier in the week into this piece and second, that was some damn good storytelling!

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    1. The Abject Muse Avatar

      Thank you, Violet! That’s an interrobang. If you add an ellipsis to the bottom, you have my logo. :-) I’m glad you enjoyed my story. It was a difficult write for some reason.

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      1. Violet Lentz Avatar

        OMG! I have never noticed that! All this time I thought it was a P! Duh!

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      2. The Abject Muse Avatar

        That’s interesting. My rabbi thought it was the Hebrew letter Kof. Everyone sees something different. :-)

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      3. Violet Lentz Avatar

        That is an intensely unique thought in itself.

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