3TC #MM83 | Brothers

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If Max had something to tell him, why didn’t he visit Jeremy in his dreams‽ That made the most sense to Jeremy, but who knew what made sense in the afterlife‽ If he only had a clue, an inkling of what was going on with Max. He knew something had to be.

“He’s here,” Tanya whispered. “Max, is there something you’d like to say to your brother, Jeremy?”

16 responses to “3TC #MM83 | Brothers”

  1. You nailed this one beautifully.

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    1. Thanks so much Ernie. I was bawling at the end of it.

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  2. Beautiful story Susan. Thanks for using the 3TC.

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    1. Thank you, Di. Much appreciated!

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  3. a very moving story! I loved this.

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    1. Thank you, Lisa. I’m glad you enjoyed. :-)

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  4. Very well constructed story Susan!

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    1. Thank you, Peter!

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  5. It seems like Max is watching over his brother Jeremy, great story, Susan.

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    1. Thank you, Jim. It had me bawling at the end.

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  6. First of all, I love how you sneaked in that punctuation Jim talked about earlier in the week into this piece and second, that was some damn good storytelling!

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    1. Thank you, Violet! That’s an interrobang. If you add an ellipsis to the bottom, you have my logo. :-) I’m glad you enjoyed my story. It was a difficult write for some reason.

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      1. OMG! I have never noticed that! All this time I thought it was a P! Duh!

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      2. That’s interesting. My rabbi thought it was the Hebrew letter Kof. Everyone sees something different. :-)

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      3. That is an intensely unique thought in itself.

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